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2005, Set SixFive Ghazals by h e k s/lavish |
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Idol
Gratitude upon its peak of unique attitude . . . that's a mood, a mode, h e k s is grown towards,
A type that likes to write, showcasing might, since no other achy mind's creating breaking lines,
Innovate flagrant art, favorite part . . . Dr. Fallacy balancing his Ph.D off of signs vital, hymnal recital
Accomplished, admonishedthen switched jobs . . still get joshed to my astonishment most common,
Therein lies the lie . . . meseems a seat of consciousness never learnt how use its limbs, still instead,
Crack open the Bible, read the babble . . . take a suicide sip like Socrates, improperly caught disease,
Perhaps, a perfect mistake came to past . . . alas, re-emerged re-created wit' nerves never the same,
A "Thomas" that doesn't run for cover, or doubting . . or getting pre-enshrouded, not a disciple,
Independently direct, disturbing descendants . . . poking them with the peaceful end of an olive branch,
Heretic birth minus a purpose of genetics-depth embedded . . Death emerges out of its third personage
Brief exhaling, a relaxing release, patchouli-relief . . grief for ailing scented sailing incense to kindred Dialectical CraniumThis, to be considered a rendering to the "skully", keeping it gangsta or gully, while mentally fumbling
Ethics come as thoughts bundled up in a bulky package . . . delivered ante meridiem fastest multi-faceted Ramble on-and-on about the tidiest spots on the market, minus the bullseye and targetarrowheads
Found a hobby, starting tomorrow . . . advocate-spiritualists can see their enemy Aethetical dropping
Zig-zag around spherical socialites, calculate digi-divinity, by having a quick hand hold an abacus credible
My proverbial knife inflicted a wicked-systema Christian bellows "Mark of the Beast!" suggestible
Official of government-branch grabbed utensil, penned-down missives, mailed 'em to my address
A choice between standing on a pinnacle in Israel, or a newly-developed rostrum in colossus-Rome,
If analogic-h e k s is too much, alrightmessage is simple, American Academia's out of touch,
Achievement gaps lapsed, guessing upon a former inquiry . . perhaps, bereavement caps out Malthusian,
Appearing ill, materialists . . . physically stripping self of self-proclaimed famethen simply knelt at will, Mimesis of the SecularTask is simple, ripples tripled amount to a match, accountable batchperplexed conceptual
Mannerisms mattered, of the less, aneurisms patterned 'cause of stress . . . God instilled a kill animalistic
Solitude soluble, through a hollow-mood, almost dissolvable, deliquescent molecules seep low enough
Therefore, Time is short . . . line-support, without reason nor rhyme, of course . . his mind's a sword
Casually balancing salary, higher-critical municipalities . . . divorce, then get alimony of a split matrimonial
Causality of effectcelebrated R.I.P. as 'memberance of recently departed artistic dismemberment
Heroin, in a heroine's veins coursed its way, 'til Marilyn's insane without a care of kin-in vain
Little Ms. Mistress Misfit misses hints of Ahimsa, since this habitat's proving to be beyond impractical
Perspective surfacedfrom, a third-personage on emergence with curse and mirth, anew-exorcist
Malcolm to Aethetic-separatistin recess-cathect, behavior favored to suppress tri-lateralist regress
Machinated schemes, pull a quick-Idiamin and get 'em out, utilizing an ideaof when and how Recess-Regret . . . and the Aesthetic
What is the causality that entails this ease of breezy? . . . Predicaments predict a quick offense,
Merit or credit gatheringtaxed self-worth, purchase a salehappily, run fingers through Hell's Purse,
9/11 is not a date to commemorate, but the moment in a day we alarmed any attentive paramedic,
h e k s intrepidknown for sketchin' out plans, metaphor wars smack similes, Rap's Penalty,
Artillery in ink, a lesson of grip, my "less" of sin messed heavily withbullets dealted pelted pelvises,
A hearse in rehearsal, a verb turned to a form that worsen the turmoil, clutch the crucifix for reversal,
Suggesting that Man's best scheme is to have a clandestineautomatics and banana clips equipped,
Freed from social commentary encampmentsfootnoted surroundings under guise of enjambments,
Give up?Please, only a quitter queriesh e k s embitteredstill, giver of hindered literaries,
Words never emulate, but somehow stimulate the inner-stem underneath propositi's skinin wait,
No demand for ill miniatures, my way of command to literature, ministered mechanical and sinister, To Seek Out
Inclined, when my mind's fluent . . just-minded, in the form, of a rhymein it's truest
Theoretician under a bettered-systemwhether isms are clevered, or severed . . whatever
Perhaps, h e k s should allow the physical to pass off its characteristics as character initiates
Cavort on average poet's conveyor belt accurate speeds, adapted, increase on maximums Acuras reach
Psychoanalysts confront the fact they can't handle somnambulists that comprised mathematics in sleep trances
My weapons are massive . . . wordy, and in a shape ready to accelerate Hellish-rage like warheads
An offer consumed, properly proferring affronted by a scoffer's improper mood at a time inopportuned
Sabbatical-horrorscope . . . classicalandbeseemingly ecclesiastical to partake in Eucharist-rituals
Madnessand that holier-than-thou mindset even got non-Arabs mad-strapped . . blackened
Penuriesaffinities unrepented fortally-up injuries resembling enmity deposited to President Kennedy
Theosophically state my sentiments of unalloyed bliss as a favored-persona amongst the emanate Editor's CommentsSun Nov 27 11:50:04 2005 h e k s' ghazals display an oral grounding that gives them their individual flow. These ghazals are a rich weave of sounds, images, allusions, comments, ideas . . . When I first read these ghazals, I thought immediately of Melvin B. Tolson, whose use of word-play, allusion, and flowing rhynes resembles h e k s' poems. (I don't know whether Tolson is an influence on h e k s, but I suspect so.) My second thought on reading these ghazals, of course, was music. Not just hip-hop, not just an MC spitting rhymes, but other genres: free-form jazz (perhaps because I've been listening to Ornette Coleman) and the genre-bending sounds of a band like Liquid Soul, whose sound includes horn-choruses, swing, be-bop, hip-hop, and, I'm sure, others that I don't recognize. I recommend reading these poems aloud. As any poem, really, should be read aloud, but expecially these. Teaching literature, I've been told by students that some poems didn't make sense to them until I read them aloud. (The students could read them aloud for themselves, of course.) The poems mingle different types of diction and references to a variety of cultural areas. For instance, in "Idol," the diction ranges from "ahimsa" (Sanskrit for nonviolence) to Jessica Simpson, from Socrates to "American Idol." There is a strong cultural/social/political criticism in these ghazals as well, but done with word-play, sound-play. Perhaps, instead of "criticism," the best word would be "reflections" or maybe "provocations." I don't see an organized systematic point-of-view in the poems so much as an attitude that challenges the reader to respond. |